Belly First
Making things worse
Jerry laughed, as he saw Sally's bottoms slid off her thighs
He held them in his hands, then slid down from up high
He went belly first, splashed in the big tank to laugh at his friend
Things only got worse as he began to condescend
Then they were both surprised as his trunks floated by
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Rachel Reviews: The Spiral Archive by Pieter Hendrik
It's difficult for me to know where to start with a review of this book as it was, for me, an entirely unique experience and one that I'll probably never have again. I don't want that to be interpreted as unenjoyable but it has left me scratching my head a little and ruminating on its content, its themes and its characters.
By Rachel Deeminga day ago in BookClub
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lol. He deserved it.
LOL! Instantly karma! Loved this!
Oh...I see where this is going... 😅
Haha! Karma got him good :)
hahahaha