Love reigns no more
Only
Detachment
Anger
Abuse
Shame
Sorrow
Best to become invisible
But how?
You are found
When hiding, hushed and haunted
You are seen
When cowering, curled and confused
Backlash may be immediate, indifferent, inhumane
Best to become invisible
But how?
Leave.
Author's note: If you are in an abusive relationship, please do consider leaving. Seek help. Call 1-800-96-Abuse (1-800-962-2873.)
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Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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Dang...you're right though. In that situation, the only thing you can do is leave and take your freedom back. Great poem!
Wow. Powerful stuff there Julie. Thank you for posting it. So many need to see it because so many are living it. Great job.
A true real message that is hard for many to follow. Such a strong poem.
This is powerful, Julie. So direct and to the point and such an important topic. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Leaving is the best way but sometimes the trauma bond is so strong. So heartbreaking. Loved your poem!
I love your repetition of "but how" it hits hard.
For some this is not easy. Excellent poetry . I hope it empower someone who need it the most. 💜