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BEAUTY

Is bound to the law of ageing, recardless.

By Irene Mugang Narewec Published 10 months ago 1 min read
By Irene Mugang Narewec

Hi beautiful

You came from above

From the top of my highest mountain that's measure 4,509 meters tall

By my young brother who just found his true love

You must have resemble her beauty

That's why he took you with him

And you sat on my table

My little world glow

But now you are only a beautiful memory

You tell me that beauty won't last

Wherever we originate from

We are not immune to the law of ageing

I pray that when beauty fades

My young brother will still in - love

GratitudeinspirationalFamily

About the Creator

Irene Mugang Narewec

I got inspired and motivated by other people's work. Their books and teachings molded me to become a leader and agent of change. Am here to give back to the world.

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  • Emos Sibu Poriei (Kaya)9 months ago

    Amazing! I love the way you write Irene. Excellent! 😊❤️

  • Mark Graham9 months ago

    Good job and you must really love your brother and his significant other by this poem.

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