Mountains rise alone,
Rocks inevitably break
But flowers still grow.
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Your haiku is lovely. I believe the word "inevitably" is 5 syllables, but there is still time to make an edit and qualify for the challenge. Best wishes... your poem is very meaningful and insightful.