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Beauty and the Mess

Prompt 6/19/2025

By Ellie HoovsPublished 7 months ago โ€ข 1 min read

Soot-laced hands, still shaking

offered loaves of bread

with fists closed, unexpectant.

worn shoes crunched the fragments of stained glass

that littered the smithereens with color,

the dust and ash now sanctified with dreams

as the sun beams over the shrapnel;

rainbows of defiance.

The air, still thick with the gray haze of smoke

held every

whispered

word;

songs of home shared between strangers,

kisses pressed into foreheads,

bandages fashioned from shirts

off of each other's backs.

Children drew flowers

on bullet-holed walls,

remembering the daisies that grew here,

before.

It wasn't peace.

It was the passing of water hand to hand

that began filling the cracks

with hope.

Beauty is the love that survives the war;

Quiet.

Tired.

But keeps holding you anyway.

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About the Creator

Ellie Hoovs

Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.

My Poetry Collection DEMORTALIZING is out now!!!: https://a.co/d/5fqwmEb

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  • Susan Fourtanรฉ 7 months ago

    I also love this line:โ€ Beauty is the love that survives the war;โ€ And the ones about the daisies that once were there. Very beautiful yet sad, but gives you things to think about.

  • Beautiful. Love this line Beauty is the love that survives the war;

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