death defying, leaping unbound
Caught up in your hummingbird throat
Warbling and swallowing my heart like a dying fish to a swarm of locusts
Bear trapped, my soul is waterlogged and plentiful to quench your pain
A salve that quiets the unending sorrows
You ask a trapped bear for a cup of sugar
To soften the bitterness of
Disarming into survival mode
For a heavy moment
You freeze and wait
Breath abated
Leaking too much fresh oxygen into my dying lungs
Bear trapped in deep foliage
Deer brings me water, fresh and cold from the fast moving stream
Deer leaps like a newborn
Free and unbound
From what may have been a ghost prison of their own making
Longing for a better trap
Longing for
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Rachel Reviews: The Spiral Archive by Pieter Hendrik
It's difficult for me to know where to start with a review of this book as it was, for me, an entirely unique experience and one that I'll probably never have again. I don't want that to be interpreted as unenjoyable but it has left me scratching my head a little and ruminating on its content, its themes and its characters.
By Rachel Deeming4 days ago in BookClub
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I found the ending of this both sad and optimistic - Nicely done!
Fascinating imagery, leaving me unbalanced & unsure. I have no idea what this is about but I'm bound to ponder it for a while.
This may not be what you intended for readers to get from this poem but it made me think of the the saying, the grass is always greener on the other side. Your poem was extremely emotional!
writing is excellent.