I like to stab the bear with the stick
In an attempt to get it to spill the beans
And finally fucking speak
Its mind because I need to know
What it is thinking when it shuts me out.
I'd love to be able to help it, you see.
But I must do this with the tone lathered in sarcasm,
And the prodding nature of my eyes.
I want to know every single fucking detail
Of all the things it refuses to admit out loud.
I need to know how to understand the intentions
Behind why you told me to stay away, forever.
I have no concept of space,
Personal or otherwise, I'll ignore it.
Do not think that I will respect your privacy
I must satiate my empathy first and always.
~
About the Creator
Ruby Red
Heya friend, I'm Red!
I write poetry, so subscribe for a hint of vulnerability, some honesty and the occasional glimpse behind my mask 🌱
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This is intense. I've been in situations where I felt like I needed to dig deep to understand someone's motives. Sometimes, being straightforward is the only way to get answers.