Naked and alone I wait for you
Sadness in our home, it breaks me
Invisible to your mind
Careless with your time, I
Can't change things for you
What you've been through
I've lived through,
My heart
aches
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Day 4 of Quitting
If this is how sobriety feels, maybe it’s better to go through life a little buzzed… this, along with other hits like, I want to kill myself, I wish I was dead, and I’m going to throw myself off a bridge have been the only thoughts on rotation these past few days. I promise myself that if, in a month, I still feel like this (‘this’ meaning despondent, full of rage, and simultaneously numb) I can go back to smoking. Until mid-February though? Nicotine is off the table.
By sleepy drafts4 days ago in Longevity
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Felt the sadness. Amazing writing!
This was so profound and relatable! So well done!
Powerful lines
Short and sweet, I wish it was a bit longer you know because I feel as though there's more you wanted to say.