Balloons In The Sky
Free as the wind floating Up and up
By Marie381Uk Published about a year ago • 1 min read

By George’s Girl 2024
The Balloons escape
up up and away floating
Tiny dots so high
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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Outstanding
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Heartfelt and relatable
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Comments (4)
I loved this, this never crossed my mind at all. Amazing how creative you are, with all the different colours and how far up they are, they do resemble tiny dots. I love the imagery, very fun and thoughtfully written.
That's so pretty and colourful. Loved your Haiku!
This was fun
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