Bailemos, Fatigue!!ππΎπΊπΎπ£βοΈβοΈ
~~For 'The Poetry Of The Hunt' Challenge~~
Walk worthy, Child of God... π£
Move forward with precision... π£
Walk worthy, Child of God... π£
Move forward with precision... π£
Don't worry Father... I will obey...
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**I'm on the hunt for limitless vitality & boundless vivacity....
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As of now, my energy is ever-changing... ππΎ
like the staggered steps of children playing a youthful game of 'Red Light, Green Light'... ππ©ππ©
Bailemos, fatigue! ππΎ
I still have tons of fight... π₯
Please gather your Kleenex now... cuz I'll be winning the trophy at the end of the night. πο»Ώ
Energy vampires beware, I've got the Lord Almighty, my pen & Trinity on my side... God's power & loving light are matchless; you had better run & hide. βοΈβοΈπ¬οΈπ©Έπ»
My Heavenly Father lovingly paves my way...
Please know that, His glorious might will have the final say...
And I am comforted by the knowledge that fatigue will be sidelined one precious day! ππΎπ₯³
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Tiffany Gordon
I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.
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π£A lot of power in this image, in this pose. A nice choice. Love the footprint at the end of each line. π£Ooo I love the rhythm in the statement or command, followed by the response. Powerful choice of words: -Vitality -Vivacity π£The rhythm dances while the words elevate the reader, bringing a bounce to our step. Outstanding work, Tiffy π€π€β€οΈ
Energy Vampires-love it. Great motivational poetry
Very positive and uplifting.
Well-wrought, Tiffany! I can't imagine you tired, your work is full of so much positive energy!
So very empowering, Tiffany!!!! My warrior friend, I love you!
Hey Tiffany, I missed this one, such a blessed read too. Hoping you are again filled with energy...Hugs.
I so need this brand of energy...where do you keep the well of boundlessness again. I found this one at the right time...never rush the holy spirit. I think i will go drink some holy spirit water. β€οΈπ€πFatigue is a monster, prayers to bind it to heck. Blessings child of God. TY.
I'm on the same hunt... for more energy! This is going in my prayers this morning! "For limitless vitality and boundless vivacity"πβ€οΈ
Thank you for these spiritual energizing poem, Tiffany. π₯°π₯°π₯°
Good work, Cousin Tiffany! Keep the Faith!
What a powerful declaration of faith and determination! πͺπΎ I love how you've blended together spiritual obedience with such vibrant energy and playful imagery. The "Red Light, Green Light" metaphor is brilliant! Your voice is full of joy and fighting spirit, even while acknowledging the struggle. The way you personify fatigue and challenge it to a dance ("Bailemos, fatigue!") is both defiant and delightful. Keep walking worthy and moving forward!
Well done... and fitting for the challenge. Love it! ππ₯
I wonβt mess with Tiffster!! Go get βem! This was frantic and frenetic and fun but with a serious theme. Wishing vitality and boundless energy for one and all ! ππππ
This is such an uplifting and empowering piece, full of fire, faith, and rhythm!
Amen! Energy vampires beware! Nice wine, Tiffany β€οΈπΎπ
So very beautiful just like everyone has said β¦οΈπ¦β¦οΈ
This was so positive, uplifting, and powerful! Loved your poem so much Tiffy!
Beautiful heart, soul and poem
Goodbye fatigue, indeed! A timely poem, and well-written, Tiffany!
What a beautiful poem! I love this βΊοΈβΊοΈ
A very powerful profession of your faith, Tiffany! Well done!