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Bad News In A Happy Place

Deceit is the prelude to betrayal

By Rosie J. SargentPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - July 2024
Photo by CatsComing on Pexels

We never go out for breakfast - lovely.

I wonder, what's the occasion?

Between us, salt and pepper.

Eggs, sausages, and toast.

Words spoken with looks;

Eyes of sadness

And deceit...

Lies now

Told.

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  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Great little nonet. Congratulations on the Top Story.

  • Congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Nathal Nortanabout a year ago

    Thanks

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Powerful lines

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Rachel Steinmetzabout a year ago

    Truly profoundly written! Nice job!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautiful piece. Congrats on the TS.

  • angela hepworthabout a year ago

    Ooh this was good!!

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    So poignant and sad. Congrats on TS! 🥳🥳🥳🥳

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    Ouch! Nothing like time and place. Engaging and original approach, well done!

  • Sarby Salawie Luwelengabout a year ago

    Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing

  • This was so poignant. Loved your Nonet!

  • Daniel Hooksabout a year ago

    I hope you’re ok Rosie. Powerful words condensed speak a language of sadness.

  • Joe Pattersonabout a year ago

    Well done.

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