With the hunger know I’m starving
In my room I’m not with Marvin
Thinking what I need to do
Writing rhymes yeah just for you
With my team you know I’m starting
All the bad deeds yeah It’s parting
Staying strong I need that too
Need a Sherlock with the clue
Time Is short It’s getting nearer
Visions getting bloody clearer
With the glasses that I wear
On this beat you know I’ll share
Look myself upon that mirror
Scoring goals like Alan Shearer
Striking was the thing I cared
Offside goals I wasn’t spared
One way getting rid of bad deeds
Do a good deed erases that….
Put your heart and soul Into It
Yeah I’ll say It on my rap….
Charities the only way you
Can recover from the bad….
Stay with people that are happy
Otherwise you’ll end up sad….
With the hunger know I’m starving
In my room I’m not with Marvin
Thinking what I need to do
Writing rhymes yeah just for you
With my team you know I’m starting
All the bad deeds yeah It’s parting
Staying strong I need that too
Need a Sherlock with the clue
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If You’re Having A Bad Day…. It’s Okay
Don’t Be Shy…. My Rhymes Will Deffo Put A Smile On Your Face 🤗
Voice For The Voiceless….
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haha, I loved this!! especially the Stay with people that are happy Otherwise you’ll end up sad…. because negativity spreads way faster than positivity.
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Nice work. Was there a person experience that made you write this ?
Ohh, this one hits hard! And hey, with Ramadan coming to an end, now’s the time to give it your all. Make every moment count—fill these last few days with good deeds, patience, and gratitude. Bad deeds may be a part of the past, but a strong finish can set the tone for what’s ahead. You've got this! Haychie ✨