Poets logo

Autumn's Fleeting Beauty

A moment suspended between holding and letting go

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Autumn's Fleeting Beauty
Photo by Annie Spratt on Unsplash

Golden leaf spirals

one breath of wind, then silence

on the empty branch

Haikunature poetry

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments (4)

Sign in to comment
  • Krysha Thayer4 months ago

    I feel like the silence on the empty branch is just as beautiful as the golden leaf that fell. Gorgeous haiku.

  • Imola Tóth4 months ago

    This is beautiful, Tim! I wish you all the best with this challenge! But now, how can I enter? haha

  • Leslie Writes4 months ago

    Lovely

  • Marilyn Glover4 months ago

    So much can be heard in that silence. Nice work, Tim!🍂

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.