Leaves dance over head
My boredom is shucked away
Like crackling corn husks
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Getting Serious About Comedy (Part I)
If I were asked to remark on my life and the childhood that paved some road leading me to this point, I would have to say something about all the funny people who surrounded me for the last 26,872 days (and counting). Somewhere along that road, I became a big fan of laughter and the comedy that spawns it – and, I mean not only my own laughter, but the laughter of others, some of which I have actually been responsible for inducing.
By John Oliver Smith5 days ago in Humor
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I could see the leaves dancing over my head and I could feel it wiping my boredom away, it is something outside of myself that I could rest my attention on. This haiku was so nicely done, you brought nature to us and us to nature. You brought the calm with every letter and the vividness in every line.