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Aural Journey Home

Renga for Hannah’s ‘not challenge’

By Teresa RentonPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Aural Journey Home
Photo by Alexander Holmes on Unsplash

Heavy drops of rain

Slide from glossy leaf tips, bowed

Sound of East meets West

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This is the link to Hannah’s gorgeous starting haiku Yūgen.

Here is Hannah’s ‘Invitation to Renga’ with me—highly recommended entertaining read!

Haikunature poetry

About the Creator

Teresa Renton

Inhaling life, exhaling stories, poetry, prose, flash or fusions. An imperfect perfectionist who writes and recycles words. I write because I love how it feels to make ink patterns & form words, like pictures, on a page.

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  • Daphsamabout a year ago

    Beautifully put!

  • James U. Rizzi2 years ago

    the second line has such beautiful imagery and only in seven syllables very nice

  • This was absolutely beautiful! Loved your lines!

  • Joe O’Connor2 years ago

    Love this image Teresa, and the way it connects to Hannah’s trip in the outdoors, back into nature:)

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    Even when you are writing the smallest of pieces...such sublimeness is present. Hope Ms Renton that you are well?

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Ooh, lovely, thank you so much for this!

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