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Audience Participation Anomaly

a strange and sordid tale of nothing in particular!

By BrenPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 2 min read

i put a little portion of me in each piece

a slice or a nibble a bite or a dribble

i bare my chest so you can have at me

rip tear rend peal flay skin in blood we scribble

every deal is sealed in blood

every village more than just mud

every feel is the life of a death

every grey deal is another single breathe

you end up in a grave

you end up on the meth

selling pics of your asshole

on dodgy russian dvd's

behind the servo on main street

blowing drunks for donuts

blowing chunks with no nuts

how did this get all fucked up

how did it come to this

nothing gets a foot in

unless its covered in piss

nothing goes in unless it slides real nice

nice smooth and easy

tight loose and greasy

in and out

and in and out

and in and out

make ya legs all dizzy and shit

lose your load and your head

it is just love and conquest

in our smiles in our minds and in our bed

out of the gutter and into the chateau

like a cheap and nasty disney

there are no fucking rainbows

nothing ever ends happy

rip it out rip it out and live

free fucking prime time

they’ll take all you cannot give

yeah nah that wasn’t a joke

but i can tell ya fuckin ripper

and then it's time for a smoke

nothing like sucking down a good fuckin durry

get it right down into your little girlie lungs

a little cough won't fuckin kill ya

suck it like a fuckin champ all keen

get on the fuckin winnie blues

get on em real fuckin quick cunt

sack em rack em slack em attack em

show em how it is being a sick skitz cunt

i'm not here to tell you how to live your life

i'm not here to tell you what to fuckin say

i'm not here to cajole, direct or guide you

or offer assistance in any kind of way

i merely put words in sentences

i use the sentences to make lines

sometimes if i’m being careful and clever

i can get the fucks to rhyme

(all day ref!)

these lines in turn become paragraphs

a written picture of state of mind?

a jumbled garbled ambiguous piece

of things fictitious, nice and unkind

applied with carefully pondered pockets

of store bought after thought

could fill a volume pushed to the test

or at best then just barely half a page

raise a smile or shed a tear

a stupid riddle to invoke that rage

a simple play on words maybe

or even a dreadful pun

there no joke this is the end

and this is the nothing what was done

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    You described the slippery slope perfectly and the anger that comes along with it. Well done. I think you could definitely put this in the slam poetry category, too.

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