
Nightcafe creation
One evening, at a beach diner called Stu’s
Atlantica came in fresh from the ocean
With her eyes of an unusual hue
She had taken a potion
So that she could walk on through
And dance the locomotion
And the twist too
Then she caused quite a commotion
When she sat down at a table for two
For she had decided to follow through on her notion
And order a burger and fries from the menu that was blue
She sat and waited for her order, impatient for the taste explosion
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Comments (4)
Very cool and attention grabber poem!
🧡 🧡 Love a burger too.
Oooo, how I wish I would have the chance to meet Ariel and eat burgers with her! Loved your poem!
Wonderful poem!!! I love it...