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At the Mall

a painting of people...

By BrenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

martyrs and farters

rapists and drunks

wankers and thankers

escapists and punks

rappers and crappers

stay at home wives

parading their pouts

comparing their lives

fuckers and truckers

hippies and nuns

ferals and street kids

junkies with guns

bikers and pikers

goths and geeks

fighters and biters

moths and freaks

cutters in gutters

sub-urban slime

suburbanly suburban

please insert rhyme

winos and twelvies

preachers and nuts

yoga pants milf flash

credit or cash

edgy tough street kids

with cute little knives

pram bound babies

beginning their lives

dashing toddlers

compete for space

walking framed oldies

all over the place

pikeys and psychos

nut jobs and wigs

out of work rock stars

doing mall jobs as gigs

faggots and maggots

riff raff and scum

dickheads and thickheads

and a solitary bum

social commentarysurreal poetryperformance poetry

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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