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The dreamland of wandering

By J. JayPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Image by Saydung89 from Pixabay

Everything hinged on one dream,

But it sunk in a sugar-tar land

Draw up a new escape scheme.

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Gates crumbled; the sun snuffed her beam

We bargained with the marching clockhand,

Everything hinged on one dream.

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Rivers wasted to a dusty trench stream,

Prisoners plotted in the midnight sand

Draw up a new escape scheme.

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The warning bell clanged, but they ignored its scream.

They dithered and planned into traps firsthand;

Everything hinged on one dream.

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Where was the warmth of the Gleam?

It shivered and bent to the cold land’s demand

Draw up a new escape scheme.

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Without the light, we’re a blind stumbling team,

braided with darkness that will only expand.

Everything hinged on one dream.

Draw up a new escape scheme.

artinspirationalMental HealthVillanellesurreal poetry

About the Creator

J. Jay

I like to share my art and writings, whether it's silly or serious. I'll also feature a comic I work on called Writing Whoas, which is about the joys and hardships of being a writer. Stick around to laugh or cry.

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  • Chloe Gilholy2 years ago

    Great imagery best of luck in the challenge.

  • Great challenge entry and loved the image

  • This was so optimistic and powerful! Loved your Villanelle!

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Excellent villanelle. It’s always good to have a back up plan for sure! ☺️👍

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