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Asleep...Awake

Petulant Light Breaks Water.

By Novel AllenPublished 7 months ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read

~~~gently~~~gently drifting off

~~~to the mystic land of slumber

~~~where cares ~ thoughts ~ troubles ~woes...

nestle...

forgotten...

~~~fading from nothingness...to angelic sleep

~~~lovingly enfolded in blissful oblivion

~~~cradled in the loving arms of silence

~~~darkness ~ all-enveloping ~ overcomes the senses

~~~welcoming each sojourner with a tender smile

SILENCE~~~dreamland now beckons the soul to play

~~~Night slowly passes in rapturous calming dreams

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Relaxed body exhales,

a magician waves his wand...brows unfurrow....

dream...sleep

~~~

SMILES begin fading....Day is arriving

The soul rebels...I want to stay here in this place

But...

Father Time cannot be denied his rights or rites

~~~~~~Grudgingly...Eyelids flutter open...

~~~the mind's eye grumbles...the senses incensed

~~~just five more minutes...it pleads

So sorry....time to awaken...open your eyes

~~~a slow unwilling lifting of the eyelids

like a beautiful, petulant, peevish and sulking child

Given no choice...Irascible. Still, it must Welcome...

Light~~~

~~~though it intrudes upon the realm of oblivion

Like...

Breaking the surface of a slumbering ocean

with pinpoints of painful sunbeams...

piercing the quiet motion of the waves

of a once peaceful sleep drowned soul ...

adrift on cloud nine...slumbering, submerged in velvet hues of dreams,

~~its beauty curled like mist beneath the weight of silence....

Reluctantly...

Sleep ~ once a querulous ocean.

Now awakens ~

Surrendering to the light!

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About the Creator

Novel Allen

You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.

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  • Mother Combs6 months ago

    Great entry, Novlet <3 I love waking up to light coming in the window

  • Sid Aaron Hirji6 months ago

    As much as I love the sunlight, often it wakes me up too early

  • Speaking of Father Time, our dad used to get us up for school by walking into our pitch black room, throwing on the light & shouting, "Rise & shine! Time to get up!" I hated being awakened by that blinding light. I got to where I would awaken as soon as I heard his footsteps coming down the basement stairs. He always looked somewhat surprised & slightly bemused when he turned the light on only to find me standing in the middle of the room with my pants halfway on.

  • Oooo, querulous is a new word for me. Loved your beautiful poem!

  • Sandy Gillman7 months ago

    This is beautiful. It made me feel so calm and at ease while reading it.

  • Lana V Lynx7 months ago

    This challenge fits you so well, Novel! I'm enjoying your entries tremendously.

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