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sometimes i
see
things
that aren't even there
burnt out retinal emotion commotion
i don't even know if i care (anymore)
sometimes i
hear
things
faint and strained to the distance things
tamed tremors tenuously translated
darkness swallows the vibrationally real
sometimes i
feel
things
crawling under my skin
i know how to get them out
how the fuck did they get in?
sometimes i
smell
things
and it could be a mile away
some fired up a BBQ
or an embryonic fray
sometimes i
taste
things
and i swear it tasted like beer
half an hour later the fuzzy began
and then everything became clear
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
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Comments (3)
this one is so creative, leaves you craving more. Alas, I have no sense (yeah, I did that)
This is really cool, Brenton! You had me with 'emotional commotion' and then I get to a 4 word All T alliterative line! I love alliteration. Great execution wIth all five senses. Intoxicating. ⚡💙⚡
Powerful stuff! Loved this.