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arrows of love

Great longing

By Kisama Riyo Published about a year ago 1 min read

A great arrow of love hit me

It hit a boiling heart

If my eyes don't embrace my mother

My life is lost and the eye cries for it

How many hearts have melted with separation

How many hearts have been killed by separation

How many lovers have lost their beloved

His heart burned and time passed by

You are my life, my soul, my spirit

You are the perfection of beauty, complete

He recites words with description and cannot

Describing it cannot be obtained

The meanings of words are lost with your description

Eloquence and eloquence were lost and dried up

Neither his eloquence nor his eloquence

No path to your praise is drawn

My words were lost and my letters were absent

Lost as a slave is lost and lost

You were my sun but in prison

The ray of life set and disappeared

How much I burn from your separation with longing

We embraced like this before

How many hearts have melted from separation

How far from a beloved killed

My heart was killed far away

I was hit by a great arrow of longing

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About the Creator

Kisama Riyo

I have always been interested in poetry and essay, especially rhyme style, so I decided to post my essay here and see if I have any talent in poetry or not.

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