When I look at you now,
It causes grief in my heart.
I have a hunch you're not fine.
I can see that your life has altered.
When you smile.
Do you honestly mean that?
I notice you're laughing.
Are you really laughing?
Life has changed you.
Into someone different.
Life has taken the true you away.
Life has captured your mind.
You overthink things.
You're always afraid.
You’re always
Between melancholy and delight.
I think you are depressed.
I believe you need guidance.
Talk to me; I'm here for you.
Feel free, and open your heart.
Do not keep anything to yourself.
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Gloria Penelope
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"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan8 days ago in Beat
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motivation poem.. Love your poem.
That's so sweet Gloria. It's always better to talk in person. Love your poem.
The lines...Talk to me; I'm here for you. Feel free, and open your heart..... a feeling of compassion arises in my heart...
It's always better to talk about things rather than keeping it to ourselves. Loved your poem!