
Just as the world tilts forward,
the asphalt gives way
to something steeper than sleep,
steeper than the hill
I climbed to get here.
My car crests the ridge
and suddenly there's no more up,
only down stretching
like a black tongue
into the valley's mouth.
The steering wheel goes light
in my hands. Gravity
takes over the conversation.
Pine trees blur past
too fast to count,
their shadows racing
alongside my headlights.
This is the moment
between coasting and falling,
when physics becomes personal
and the road decides
it's tired of being flat.
My stomach lifts.
The speedometer climbs
without my help.
In the rearview mirror,
the hilltop shrinks
to a memory of level ground.
Brake lights bloom red
in the darkness ahead,
someone else learning
what I'm learning:
that some roads
only go one direction,
and turning back
was never an option.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.



Comments (5)
A real roller coaster ride of a poem! I love: “ This is the moment between coasting and falling, when physics becomes personal and the road decides it's tired of being flat.” I almost feel sorry for the road… getting bored with being flat!🤣
Love that ending! Keep them coming.
👏👏👏:"some roads only go one direction, and turning back was never an option." So good, that closing is fire.
✌🏾
This was such a vivid ride.