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Appalachian Descent

The Drop

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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Just as the world tilts forward,

the asphalt gives way

to something steeper than sleep,

steeper than the hill

I climbed to get here.

My car crests the ridge

and suddenly there's no more up,

only down stretching

like a black tongue

into the valley's mouth.

The steering wheel goes light

in my hands. Gravity

takes over the conversation.

Pine trees blur past

too fast to count,

their shadows racing

alongside my headlights.

This is the moment

between coasting and falling,

when physics becomes personal

and the road decides

it's tired of being flat.

My stomach lifts.

The speedometer climbs

without my help.

In the rearview mirror,

the hilltop shrinks

to a memory of level ground.

Brake lights bloom red

in the darkness ahead,

someone else learning

what I'm learning:

that some roads

only go one direction,

and turning back

was never an option.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶6 months ago

    A real roller coaster ride of a poem! I love: “ This is the moment between coasting and falling, when physics becomes personal and the road decides it's tired of being flat.” I almost feel sorry for the road… getting bored with being flat!🤣

  • Julie Lacksonen6 months ago

    Love that ending! Keep them coming.

  • K.B. Silver 6 months ago

    👏👏👏:"some roads only go one direction, and turning back was never an option." So good, that closing is fire.

  • Kendall Defoe 6 months ago

    ✌🏾

  • Sandy Gillman6 months ago

    This was such a vivid ride.

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