the girl who doesn’t care:
has a big dog.
(kinda scary)
is busy - very.
says she don’t study.
doesn’t answer texts.
(duh - she’s busy).
smokes too many cigarettes.
can down a bottle of whiskey.
has cocaine for breakfast.
fucks too many boys.
(and girls).
drives too fast.
sings too loud.
laughs too much.
doesn’t do relationships.
doesn’t do anything really.
is strangely gentle around kids.
can be found with random bruises.
stares blankly at the sky.
always looks kinda preoccupied.
uses big words.
looks a little intimidating.
likes stormy weather.
is a good friend but never really there.
never talks about her family.
cares too much.
About the Creator
Sara
Don’t look for love.
Be love.
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Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH5 days ago in Critique
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Very creative