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Anxious Puddle

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By James GreenPublished about a year ago 1 min read

A puddle anxious,

at the paws approaching it,

dozens of hedgehogs,

it’s not big enough for them,

to wash away the day's grime.

fact or fictionsurreal poetry

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James Green

Weaving words into captivating worlds, this author's storytelling will transport you to realms of imagination and leave you breathless.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Nothing like a little puddle jumping.

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Creatively done it.

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Excellent piece of write

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