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Another Green World

or, The Great Gatsby Is Not Romantic, But I Am

By Eric JacksonPublished 5 years ago 1 min read

the worlds a little blurry and i see you at yr best

i love you

like i love myself

not a lot of things matter when i look at you

through the bottom of an empty bourbon bottle

the worlds a little blurry and i see you at yr best

you like to paint portraits of us

in places weve never been

its not real but i love the way you see us

i learned sign language to find more ways to say i love you

i cant sign my own name

yr paintings are like monet on cocaine

the world a little blurry and i see you at yr best

you leave me notes on the nightstand

tucked beneath the vase

the flowers are always dead

you never sign yr name

i hate yr handwriting

and yr job and deodorant and parents

i love how you drive and how you dress like madame curie

yr silliness and synesthesia

you close yr eyes when i kiss you

holding yr breath between my lips

my love becomes a physical thing

you look at me and i say the words

and the air around us turns green

here and now is everything

life and experience and galaxies of love all shrunk to the head of a pin

ours for the taking

the worlds a little blurry

but i see you and you see me

love poems

About the Creator

Eric Jackson

I want to tell you a story, but I don't know how it ends because I'm still writing it.

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