Poets logo

Angels collect us when we die

Angels collect leafs, our names on and our number is up

By Marie381Uk Published 11 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Angels collect us when we die

everyone’s name is written on a leaf in heaven.

When that leaf falls to the ground,

an angel comes and carries the soul away.

Isn’t this like autumn, all year long—

a quiet rain of lives descending,

soft as whispers, sudden as storms?

what if someone breaks a leaf from the tree?

Is that a life stolen,

a heart silenced before its time,

a thread cut too soon?

If a leaf drifts into water,

does a soul slip beneath the surface,

swallowed by silent depths,

lost in the ripples of fate?

Tell me, is this true?

Is the wind a messenger,

the rain a mourner,

the sun a silent witness to the falling?

Or perhaps the tree itself weeps,

shedding its leaves not from fate

but from sorrow,

each drop of sap a silent cry.

And when a leaf falls in stillness,

does the earth cradle it softly,

whispering:

You were here. You mattered.

fact or fictionFree Versenature poetryperformance poetry

About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments (2)

Sign in to comment
  • Mark Graham11 months ago

    This is TS material and what a way to look at death and dying. Good job.

  • This was really good, hope it gets TS

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.