And it feels like the stars were crashing when I looked into your eyes
You've forgot your worth so now you're floating in the sky.
Heart breaks and you lost aim.
That's okay, it wasn't yours to claim.
Autumn's coming and it's growing cold.
You were only 12 and you had to be bold.
You took a leap of faith and asked him to dare.
To love and cherish you, for you were rare.
Gemstones and rings tossed all about.
Both grew until thee was nothing but brought.
Alone again in your Garden of Eve.
Six years of pain, torture, and thieves.
But it felt like happiness,
until it was emptiness.
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The way you described the intensity of emotions as both a burden and a source of strength. It’s a delicate balance you’ve portrayed—how our feelings can sometimes consume us, yet they also shape who we are and connect us to others. The honesty in your words is powerful, and it left me reflecting on my own experiences.