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An Exchange of Bullets

For Mikeydred’s Challenge

By Sean A.Published 12 months ago 1 min read
From boukdevries.com

Mandated by God to break His commandment

Your empire shattered ours with bullets

Breaking your Golden Rule,

You cracked our souls with opium

In the name of the Father, the Son, and the Holy Pound

You plundered our land, our heritage

So we put our hearts to the side

Until the time these bullets can be returned to you

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artFree Versesad poetry

About the Creator

Sean A.

A happy guy that tends to write a little cynically. Just my way of dealing with the world outside my joyous little bubble.

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  • Cathy holmes12 months ago

    Wow, that was powerful. Well done!

  • Antoni De'Leon12 months ago

    Everywhere you look, there are dictators and evil leaders. Some skulls do need cracking right back at them. Well said, hope violence is not the answer though.

  • A powerful poem with a perfect image

  • Rachel Deeming12 months ago

    "You cracked our souls with opium". Such a great line, Shaun and that choice of statue is eerie.

  • D.K. Shepard12 months ago

    What an ominous (or promising) and perfectly phrased final line. Wonderful work, Shaun!

  • Andrea Corwin 12 months ago

    Wow. That is very profound and well done!!

  • A. J. Schoenfeld12 months ago

    I love the slap in the face you dished in this poem by pointing out the hypocrisy and offering to return the gift of violence. So nicely done.

  • Marie381Uk 12 months ago

    Really good✍️♦️♦️♦️♦️

  • Matthew J. Fromm12 months ago

    Great entry

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