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“Among the Swine”

A prodigal daughter

By Natasha CollazoPublished 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
“Among the Swine”
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The wind grieved of waste and want.

I kneel among creatures that do not pray,

but minister to my fatigued soul.

Their snouts deep in husks I would readily feed,

if pride didn’t taste worse.

Dung becomes my inheritance now,

a baptism of mud.

Once, I slumbered in silk, robed with dignity in its seams,

now even rags glance away from me.

I toil amongst the distant laughter.

Reminding me of my own, once,

in my father’s hall,

when I thought freedom meant success.

Lo, success meant slavery.

But love remembering.

Even here, amid the filth,

something gentle calls from the mire.

Go home.

So I stand, barefoot in the mud of my repentance,

the swine’s breath followed me,

as I began the treacherous walk,

back to mercy.

Gratitude

About the Creator

Natasha Collazo

Selected Writer in Residency, Champagne France ---2026

The Diary of an emo Latina OUT NOW

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  • Parvathi J2 months ago

    Wow!! I loved your poem, especially the line "if pride didn’t taste worse." It was as if each line weighed on the "I toil among.... " and in the end to land on the gentle call. Beauitful!!

  • D. J. Reddall3 months ago

    This is evocative and carefully crafted; I find this line especially haunting: "Lo, success meant slavery," especially when it is repeated.

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