“Among the Swine”
A prodigal daughter
The wind grieved of waste and want.
I kneel among creatures that do not pray,
but minister to my fatigued soul.
Their snouts deep in husks I would readily feed,
if pride didn’t taste worse.
Dung becomes my inheritance now,
a baptism of mud.
Once, I slumbered in silk, robed with dignity in its seams,
now even rags glance away from me.
I toil amongst the distant laughter.
Reminding me of my own, once,
in my father’s hall,
when I thought freedom meant success.
Lo, success meant slavery.
But love remembering.
Even here, amid the filth,
something gentle calls from the mire.
Go home.
So I stand, barefoot in the mud of my repentance,
the swine’s breath followed me,
as I began the treacherous walk,
back to mercy.
About the Creator
Natasha Collazo
Selected Writer in Residency, Champagne France ---2026
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Comments (2)
Wow!! I loved your poem, especially the line "if pride didn’t taste worse." It was as if each line weighed on the "I toil among.... " and in the end to land on the gentle call. Beauitful!!
This is evocative and carefully crafted; I find this line especially haunting: "Lo, success meant slavery," especially when it is repeated.