In the midst of the pain of one heart,
remember...
You have gradually become distant and have gone far...
The untimely rain has come
saying it is good...
I will give you everything except sorrow,
and write it in your name...
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Welcome to the Winners Announcement for The Ritual of Winter challenge. This prompt focused on winter rituals and the meaning that settles into them over time. The top pieces stay grounded in ordinary acts and repeated routines, letting winter shape the work through pace, attention, and restraint.
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Lovely words
This verse is bittersweet in the sense of loss and enduring love, as well as a recognition. The statement, "You have gradually become distant and have gone far...," is true in the agonizing, step-by-step movement of a relationship's dying breaths. There is beautiful, unselfish charity beyond the sadness in the promise to give "everything except sorrow," and in the intimation of enduring love even apart.🌞
What a poem 👏