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ALIVE Time

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By Rowan Finley Published 9 months ago 1 min read

I can’t help but capture your vibrancy,

despite your humming need for privacy.

Your color palette eagerly awaits,

and you hold wisdom beyond words and other’s fates.

Stems crossed, I see the way you stand with poise,

ready for your next dance step with musical lingering noise.

Some, as you, hold the spotlight with ease,

and the eyes of the audience are just as eager honeybees.

Your sighting just ceasefires my breath,

until my lungs start to burn and dwell on death.

But it’s very much, ALIVE time and more,

as I remind all those around me to live and that it’s certainly not a chore!

inspirationalnature poetry

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • C. Rommial Butler9 months ago

    Well-wrought! It is not life which is the chore, but circumnavigating the Machiavellian machinations of those who would try to dictate another's life rather than live their own!

  • Komal9 months ago

    This was blooming with life—felt like a pep talk wrapped in petals.

  • Archery Owl9 months ago

    I loved “ceasefires my breath” Beautiful

  • Sibley Shamra9 months ago

    I really just enjoy this! I feel like this is refreshing in a way as I read it.

  • Marie381Uk 9 months ago

    So lovely ♦️♦️♦️♦️

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