AI begets man
D’ya think it can?
I dunno but wouldn’t you say
It’s worth thinking about anyway?
What if artificial intelligence
Became more real
More relevant
By creating a new hominid form
With laser beams and organic foam?
Wouldn’t that be something to see?
I think you might agree with me
That this would be worth
Consideration
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Raymond G. Taylor
Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.
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Comments (9)
Then one day, humans would even reproduce with AI hahahahaha. Loved your poem!
This is such a fun and thought-provoking piece.
I've just watched it today. It made my head spin, but mostly because a lot of things in the movie had double and triple contour lines, like they were out of focus. I don't know if it was the original design or they neglected to give us 3D glasses but it wasn't the most enjoyable experience. I wasn't impressed with the storyline either. But Jared Leto was good. I think your poem is much better than the movie, Raymond.
I felt like you wrote this with a mischievous grin on your face. Your words are persuasive. It is developing intrigue in me. And I don't know how to feel about that. As well as the fact that the hominid form sounds scary. Like it's here to give us all nightmares. While still liking the thought of it. Outstanding work Ray 🤗❤️🖤
Very relatable to the times! I keep thinking about how this used to just be a theme in fiction, and now it's becoming reality! Great piece!
Creepy to consider, especially the fact that it may be possible. Nice little poem!! 💜
Yes, that would be interesting to think that with a set of complex prompts that evolve and improve with each attempt to eventually beget a living human form. I would be shocked and amazed at the same time. Excellent ponderance Ray.
Not seen it yet, but some interesting ideas
Hmm. Interesting thoughts. And I can’t wait to see the sequel. The original and the first remake are both favorites.