Ageless
You've Aged So Well
“You’ve aged so well”, that’s what they say.
Not a wrinkle, fine line, or sign of decay.
Never-dyed hair, as black as the night,
Years until grey or white are in sight.
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You look the same,
That smile so wide.
Fire aflame,
In your shining bright eyes.
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Still fit, still fun.
Unlike us, you’ve outrun -
The spinning wheel of time,
Its blade far behind.
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I wonder, is it so?
Do my years not show?
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I look into the pane;
My reflection thin.
The luggage of time,
Weighing heavily within.
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There in the sun – my smile on the glass.
As if never a trial, nothing vile has amassed.
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But with dusk rises a flame.
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Expect no brigade.
By the window, by night.
My mask starts to fade,
The truth is in sight.
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The fine lines appear.
The wrinkles severe.
The decay of the years.
The rapids of tears.
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They do not cease.
They fill every crease.
The façade is released.
The rifts are diseased.
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With black hair aflame,
Only white ash remains.
The flames at my back,
Carving deeper the cracks.
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I run, I claw –
Up the rifts as they saw –
And the blade of time cuts deeper.
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Until -
Finally -
Daylight breaks.
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Eyes open now,
I smile in the pane –
Like a fine wine,
Bottled, maintained.
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Fit from the miles,
Circling darkened sundials.
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It's a timeless finesse,
To be so ageless.
About the Creator
Linda Lee
My writing is driven by questioning the many epistemological concepts that we've been taught both consciously & subconsciously.
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Comments (1)
I am glad you are aging so well. My brother always told me that Art Linkletter had said, "Growing old isn't for sissys"