After the Burn
Though I cannot submit this to 'The Last Flame' challenge, I trust that even without submission, this piece will find its own love.
At first, the fire performs.
It crackles like it has something to prove,
throws light against the walls
as if arguing with the night.
We believe this is what burning means.
We feed it stories.
Old letters.
Careful silences.
Things we once held because letting go
felt like betrayal.
But fire grows tired of spectacle.
Eventually, it learns restraint.
The flames shorten their sentences.
Heat loosens its grip on the room.
What was once hunger becomes patience,
and patience becomes knowing.
This is how endings actually arrive.
Not with collapse,
but with a slow unlearning of need.
The logs remember their shape
long after the blaze forgets them.
Embers blink like distant cities,
each one holding a reason
it stayed as long as it did.
I sit close, not to revive it,
not to steal its last warmth,
but to witness the moment
it chooses completion over continuation.
Ash settles without apology.
No one claps.
Nothing asks to be saved.
The fire leaves behind
a quieter kind of proof:
that something can give everything
and still stop.
Smoke lifts what cannot be carried forward.
The room exhales.
The dark does not rush in.
It waits its turn.
By morning, there will only be
a pale circle on the ground,
cool to the touch,
honest about what happened here.
This is not loss.
This is the discipline of ending.
The flame did its work
and stepped aside,
teaching the night
how to hold what remains
without burning it again.
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About the Creator
Aarsh Malik
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Comments (4)
I felt memories surrounding me and slowly fading away, without allowing selfishness. Only those that deserve to remain stay—with hope, not noise.
This is great Aarsh, such a pity you can't enter it. I love the message here.
I love the way fire becomes a teacher here. Great work :-)
Like an Asian phoenix rising from ash