Adoption final
Joy complete and so grateful
Paperwork worth it
~ ~ ~
He was the sure star
Stole our kind hearts with such ease
He was a cute tease
~ ~ ~
Watching him play now
He loves his new toys so much
Affectionate boy
~ ~ ~
Finally a son!
How I want to teach a ton
His freedom, we won
~ ~ ~
Every day, I fight
for him to have the best life
because he has worth
~ ~ ~
Legacy he keeps
May he be blessed and grateful
Through the rest of life
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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An absolutely beautiful journey. Adaption is beautiful in itself. Well Done!!
Awww, this is so beautiful.
This is such a blessing! Beautifully woven, i feel the joy bursting through the lines.💗
This is quite beautiful. Raising a child not yours as your own has always enamored me- it's a really selfless devotion to love itself. 😍
The poem is a symbol of a beautiful journey, where love, responsibility, and freedom are perfectly balanced.
This is so heartfelt and warm! A beautiful journey in haiku form—full of love, joy, and devotion.✨