In a world of sugar and delight,
where sweetness sparkles day and night,
a symphony of flavors, a joyful feat,
let me craft a few words for sugary treats.
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First, there's caramel, smooth and warm,
like sunshine on a chilly morning,
it drizzles on ice cream with such grace,
creating smiles on every face.
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Next, the candy floss, a cotton cloud,
a sugary dream to make us proud,
pink and blue wisps, a sugary dance,
melting on tongues brings on a trance.
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Then comes chocolate, rich and bold,
a treasure trove for young and old,
dark or milk, in bars or squares,
each bite tastes of sweet affairs.
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Marshmallows, fluffy, soft, and light,
they dance on campfires, glowing bright,
a melty hug, a sugary bliss,
in every bite, a sugary kiss.
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Jelly beans and wine gums, a burst of glee,
in every color, a jubilee.
Taste the rainbow, feel the cheer,
a sugary journey, far and near.
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Oh, the lollipops, a sugary tower.
A rainbow swirl of sugary power.
They spin and twist, a sugary dance,
enchanting hearts with each sweet chance.
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Gummy bears, a chewy sensation,
tiny bears of sugary elation.
Orange, green, red, and blue,
a sugary world, just for you.
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And last, the cakes, a grand finale,
layers of sweetness in a tall rally.
With frosting dreams and icing glaze,
Celebrating life in sugary praise.
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So let us savor these sugary sweets,
a symphony of tastes, a world complete.
In this saccharine paradise, we roam,
indulging in sugary pleasures, our hearts at home.
About the Creator
Denise Larkin
A writer of a BA with honours (2.1) in Arts & Humanities recently gained a Creative Writing Master's Degree. She writes poetry, fictional short stories, and is the author of the Time to Run series, Darkness and The Non-Human.<aT.
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Comments (3)
Chocolates, marshmallows and cakes are my favourite! Loved your poem so much!
I just got some bonbons out and I am now chewing on one. Delicious sweets! Brilliantly written poem.
Suddenly craving cupcakes 🥰