In a world of sugar and delight,
where sweetness sparkles day and night,
a symphony of flavors, a joyful feat,
let me craft a few words for sugary treats.
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First, there's caramel, smooth and warm,
like sunshine on a chilly morning,
it drizzles on ice cream with such grace,
creating smiles on every face.
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Next, the candy floss, a cotton cloud,
a sugary dream to make us proud,
pink and blue wisps, a sugary dance,
melting on tongues brings on a trance.
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Then comes chocolate, rich and bold,
a treasure trove for young and old,
dark or milk, in bars or squares,
each bite tastes of sweet affairs.
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Marshmallows, fluffy, soft, and light,
they dance on campfires, glowing bright,
a melty hug, a sugary bliss,
in every bite, a sugary kiss.
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Jelly beans and wine gums, a burst of glee,
in every color, a jubilee.
Taste the rainbow, feel the cheer,
a sugary journey, far and near.
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Oh, the lollipops, a sugary tower.
A rainbow swirl of sugary power.
They spin and twist, a sugary dance,
enchanting hearts with each sweet chance.
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Gummy bears, a chewy sensation,
tiny bears of sugary elation.
Orange, green, red, and blue,
a sugary world, just for you.
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And last, the cakes, a grand finale,
layers of sweetness in a tall rally.
With frosting dreams and icing glaze,
Celebrating life in sugary praise.
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So let us savor these sugary sweets,
a symphony of tastes, a world complete.
In this saccharine paradise, we roam,
indulging in sugary pleasures, our hearts at home.
About the Creator
Denise Larkin
A writer with a BA in Arts & Humanities (specialism Creative Writing), studying for an MA in Creative Writing, writes poetry and fictional short stories. The author of Time to Run, The Island of Love, Darkness, and The Non-Human.
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Comments (3)
Chocolates, marshmallows and cakes are my favourite! Loved your poem so much!
I just got some bonbons out and I am now chewing on one. Delicious sweets! Brilliantly written poem.
Suddenly craving cupcakes 🥰