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A weak Heart Leads to a Dead Heart

Dodoitsu poem

By Diani AlvarengaPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
A weak Heart Leads to a Dead Heart
Photo by Silvestri Matteo on Unsplash

I allowed him to hit me

because my dumbass loved him,

and I valued his heart more

than the bruises in my heart.

Soon my heart will die.

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Diani Alvarenga

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  • Jordan Sky Daniels3 years ago

    Raw. I'm bad at complimenting.

  • Test3 years ago

    A powerful and honest poem. I really liked this 💙Anneliese

  • Davika lakshani3 years ago

    It's good if the poem is a bit long

  • Lana V Lynx3 years ago

    So sad and powerful.

  • Deeply written 😢😘

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