Photo by NASA Hubble Space Telescope on Unsplash
galaxies whorl hymns
of gold, harmonics echoed
through shell and auris
About the Creator
Kristen Balyeat
Words fly to me on the wind, bump into me as I'm strolling the city, splash me in the face while I rest by the river, and shake me awake in the middle of the night—I’m humbly one of the vessels they use to come to life.
Also, i love you:)
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love this piece
Stunning work, Kristen! So celestial and dream-like 💙
Hey dudette! Wonderful sky Haiku and very angelic. I had to look up auris, as that didn’t ring a bell (no pun intended). Sorry I’m so behind in your work. I hope you are well and happy. I was off here for a few weeks, back the last one. Peace out Kristen!! ☺️
This was so magnificently magical. Loved your Haiku!
So so beautiful and profound. Is that the universe singing to us as we hold the shell to our ear?
Wow! Amazing job with your diction here. It really makes your haiku stand out!
Learning words and enjoying the beauty of your Sky-ku
Mrs. Home Schooler ~ Say 'Aureate' three times real fast ~
Oh! Loved the title straight away and then got to this gorgeous haiku :) Fantastic work, my friend!!
Oooooo, I like it! Well done, dear friend!
This is amazing. Well done, you brilliant and beautiful creature.
Nice work!