Around around around wheels,
Moving along the motorway
Miles steaming by.
Countryside, strikingly beautiful
How I love those Yorkshire Dales!
Rolling hills of green and grey and pink
I move through them on these round wheels.
Constantly turning.
Miles moved through.
Heading onward, destination beaming.
About the Creator
Ruth Stewart
Never one to do one thing at a time, I'm currently writing a horror novel and a book of poetry for the daughters of narcissists. Come back soon for a link to be included in all my news, on Vocal and elsewhere. I'd love to get to know you!
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Comments (5)
I’m riding with her - I’m pointing out the flowers and clouds and shapes of trees….
I loved the picture for this matched the poem perfectly. I also love the theme of the wheels constantly turning. Well done Ruth!
Lovely
You painted a very beautiful picture here! I loved it!
I can get the excitement you have when you travel there, from the words. So much emotion and happiness in a relatively short poem. Well done!