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A Stormy Surprise

Mindfulness Nature Poetry

By StaringalePublished about a year ago 1 min read
A Stormy Surprise
Photo by Champers Fu on Unsplash

Tink! Tink! Tink!

The windows rattle.

Frozen pellets fall from the sky.

The stormy dance of nature begins.

Like an arrow.

They fall on the ground.

Pinging and pelting

They crash down upon the ground.

The temperature falls.

As my toes freeze.

A blanket is what I need.

With a hot chocolate - Its worth it.

GratitudeMental Healthnature poetryOdeStream of Consciousness

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  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    A blanket is all we need! Thanks for sharing Stari.

  • Badhan Senabout a year ago

    So Fantastic Oh My God❤️Brilliant & Mind Blowing Your Story ❤️ Please Read My Stories and Subscribe Me

  • Count me in with the hot chocolate too! Loved your poem!

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    I'm in with the hot chocolate!

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