A Slice of Subconscious
written at 4:48 AM, directly after a nightmare
BROKEN GLASS
AND BLOOD
EVERYWHERE
(Everyone blaming me)
i
can't
carry
it
all
About the Creator
Katie
My whole life I have loved writing, but haven't made the time for it. I'm trying to remedy that now.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Violence Begets
"Any last words, cowboy?" "None you'd understand, sodbuster." "Funny. That's Marshall Sodbuster to you. But I meant some last nugget that would help us in the adjudication of the myriad offenses counted against you and your gang. I wasn't asking for penitence."
By Adam Diehl6 days ago in Fiction
Comments (5)
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Short but powerful!! Great job!! 😍
Whoaaa, this hit me hard! So powerful! Loved it!
So much said in so few words. Well done.
Short but impactful...