I wish we had another sense
the sense to disappear
to choose our last day
or night
to be less present
just with a thought
No need for a bullet
an overdose
or a jump from the Parthenon
A sixth sense
involving only one death
all the way to nowhere
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Or another sense
perhaps a seventh
to bring someone back
from oblivion
without any scars
or missing parts
just with a thought
No need for prayer
a miracle
or climbing Mount Olympos
A newly discovered sense
all the way from the Cosmos
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Talking Heads - Road to Nowhere
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Patrick M. Ohana
A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.
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