
When the lotus-brain
was glutted on blood
with roots steeped in mud--
thunder laced the rain
which ran down the main
walkside like a flood,
then nipped in the bud.
Thunderclaps refrain
on the scene of play
where memories fade
or begin the fray
consumed by the shades:
where settling to stay
it rains on parades. (wet socks)
This is a semi-sonnet as it has five syllables per line rather than ten or eleven. I chose the schema ABBA ABBA CDC DCD in the Italian or Petrarchan style for the rhyme and have favored falling rhythms rather than rising.
About the Creator
Rob Angeli
sunt lacrimae rerum et mentem mortalia tangunt
There are tears of things, and mortal objects touch the mind.
-Virgil Aeneid I.462



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