
I leave my troubles to the sea
For she’s always within me.
What can I even foresee?
If everything around me is only mere lethargy...
Cause when I behold eternity
I am never estranged from me.
I am forever but an endless “be”,
A lighthouse of no vanity,
A walking history of the ease of gravity,
A particle of soft density,
For its conductibility
Lies endlessly in an everlasting potentiality.
The way that seems to get us free
It has always been what “they” call altered energy.
Shall it be always remembered,
How to gently stretch and expand this capacity.
About the Creator
Cristina Pomana
Sometimes I feel that I live between worlds, where all creation flows through me and I get to be nothing but pure eternity.
Some other times, it just feels like I am an eternal moment of becoming.
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What a powerful piece of work you have done here, sometimes I myself feel between worlds, I love this type of work so powerful. Personally loved all of this. Style of writing is fantastic and different I love different.