A Revolving Door of Emotion
Inverse Challenge # 3
I am empty inside
More than lonely
Lost in a yawning hollow void
Then you walk through the door
Seeing your face turn towards me
My heart overflows with a rush of heady love
I am full
“Inverse”
I am full
My heart overflows with a rush of heady love
Seeing your face turn towards me
Then you walk through the door
Lost in a yawning hollow void
More than lonely
I am empty inside
About the Creator
Bonnie Bowerman
Just a curious soul with a crayon, at the beginning of my writing journey. There were many absorbing detours along the way.
I am so happy, I stumbled upon this community. The depth of talent here, takes my breath away!
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Comments (5)
Nicely done!
Positive/negative, happiness and heartbreak, another ying and yang moment. Great poem.
Forwards it was so happy but in reverse it was so heartbreaking! Loved your poem so much!
Nice! Well done 👍.
Great writing.