Gutted, torn inside
Trunk red, more red than roses
Branching, I’m worried
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Crimson sun, tattered
Moon hits blood, is it you there?
Please come back to me
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Our string is taut, blue
Strum it, it sings harp blue-bird
Red tree swings madly.
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a Star cannot shine As brightly without the moon Was it me? Sorry. —- Author note: A haiku for whenever I see that I have lost a subscriber to my Vocal account. What did I do? Was it my fault? Did my writing get worse? Am I slipping away into mediocrity? Please send me a message before and let me know, it breaks my heart when I lose one of you!
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It's difficult for me to know where to start with a review of this book as it was, for me, an entirely unique experience and one that I'll probably never have again. I don't want that to be interpreted as unenjoyable but it has left me scratching my head a little and ruminating on its content, its themes and its characters.
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Collection of haiku poems is quite powerful in their simplicity and evocative language, conveying a sense of deep emotion and introspection through vivid imagery and leaving me with a lingering sense of contemplation and reflection.
Great poetry there .