A Quietude That Whispers
Winter’s First Breath
I wake to the calm of a silver-lit dawn
A quietude that whispers,
“The past is gone”
The trees now glimmer
In the first light of morn
Their branches quite spruce
Donning ice-bound, dressing gowns -
A quiet coronation for sleepy towns.
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Winter’s first breath…
- Freezing -
A pause from the fight .
A time to take stock
And a time to cool off
Relieve the strain of yesterday’s blight
Winter’s offering to the world…
A present wrapped in white
Slate wiped clean - as if brand-new
Starting afresh, hopes renew
Softly spoken promises
“We’ll see this through.”
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Each step I take on the frozen ground
Echoes with stories the cold has found
Of tears once fallen - now crystallised
Of anger cooled - and love realised.
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Time presses forward
As frost greets the day
Melting the sorrows, that once held sway.
Strangers of seasons
We all have our reasons
Best friends drift apart
But Winter, cannot temper
The warmth of an altruistic heart.
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The crisp air bites sharp
Yet it feels like a gift
A cleansing, a mending, a seasonal shift
Whilst brittle branches, may creak and sway
Their strength endures, in the coldest grey.
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So, here I stand - defiantly
In this moment of tranquillity
Breathing in the magic, the solace, the grace
Under seasonal spell
Of Winter’s chilled embrace…
Invigorated!

Comments (7)
A very hopeful poem of renewal through winter's grace. Really nicely done - congrats!
"Slate wiped clean, as if brand new" Yes!!! Congratulations, Patrick. I enjoyed reading your poem.
Congratulations 🤩… I love: “In the first light of morn Their branches quite spruce Donning ice-bound, dressing gowns - A quiet coronation for sleepy towns.”🩵 Also: “We all have our reasons Best friends drift apart But Winter, cannot temper The warmth of an altruistic heart.” Excellent ✅
I love the crowning of the town, to paraphrase. Great image. Congratulations.
Congratulations!!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Congratulations!