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A Promise in Oil

Haiku

By Pamela WilliamsPublished 23 days ago 1 min read
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Forty winters held—

still the brushstroke’s truth remains,

hushed warmth in the Glades.

Haiku

About the Creator

Pamela Williams

“Suppose I had wings like the dawning day and flew across the ocean. Even then your powerful arm would guide and protect me.”

— Psalm 139:9–10, Contemporary English Version (CEV)

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  • Sandy Gillman18 days ago

    I love the way you've made warmth and age coexist here. Beautiful work.

  • Fathi Jalil19 days ago

    It’s amazing how a painting can keep a moment alive for forty years without fading. Thank you Pamela for sharing this beautiful haiku, it really feels like looking at an old masterpiece. 🎨🖌️

  • Rachel Deeming22 days ago

    Beautiful picture, beautiful haiku. I feel the warmth in this.

  • Mackenzie Davis22 days ago

    "Forty winters held." A story in a single line. I love it!

  • This was soooo beautiful. Loved it!

  • Gregory Payton22 days ago

    Pamela - Is that the Florida Everglades. Beautiful painting, beautiful haiku. Nicely Done!!!

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